acgxb 发表于 2013-12-4 21:38   全显示 1楼
命案发生前夕的肉戏安排得太过密集，搞得所有与之相关的人物都精虫上脑似的，如果再多一些篇幅来描写人际关系效果会好一些，女警存在的作用也似乎只是来场友谊炮而已，如果改一下设定让其在男猪做警察时就有交集之类的深层次描写整个人物形象会丰满很多。

男猪兄弟之间的交情设定得太过平淡，导致阴谋揭露时的冲击力及手足相残的残酷感大为减弱，后半段男主也变得更像个头脑冷静的侦探，其实这部分戏份更适合分配给女警来担任。
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